UNITED BY SMOKE DIVIDED BY
DISTANCE
Annabel
came to pick me for the Saturday evening house party hosted at the
posh area at upper west Nairobi as per our telephone conversation
earlier in the day. She wore black leggings and a black pleasant
dress that left everything to the imagination. She stands at 5'5"
and has a voluptuous figure that pour into a nice hourglass. Her long
fingers terminated in painted, polished rich mauve nails. She looked
very astounding. I picked my hue purse and followed her to the
parking and embarked on a quest to uncover the secret of the private
house party held at a posh surroundings in upper west Nairobi.
While
driving,she was enticing me with alluring description of how the
house party might be and the handsome single guys who will be
present. Annabel likes teasing me regarding men as she wonders why a
beautiful lady like me is still single. I normally try to defend
myself on how am building my career first but she never buys any of
my theories.
“Am
single by choice but I go out on dates,the many dates you impose me
to attend without failure or else reparations might follow,”I told
her in a strident tone.
“Calm
down sweets”Annabel said softly,” You tend to be choosy and bored
instantly by someone,whats this compatibility you keep on murmuring
about? Easen up and give someone a chance,a weeks chance to evaluate
them instead of making discussion rightward after dates.”She spoke
with a deep empathetical tone.
“Listen
to me Annabel,Compatibility is the key word here and in any
relationship,I can't succumb to any Dick,Tom and Harry just for the
sake of having a relationship status. I need to have someone whom we
are compatible in all aspect. The entity of relationship is
compatibility. Our conversation to be entwined intellectually,and a
natural desire which is unconditional. Both of us should be
comfortable in our discomfort when together. This is soul-mate not
conditions related to life but soul-mate condition,getting my point
doll?”I said wholeheartedly
“Take
time hun,love will find you,think things over,but know time waits
for no man.”she muttered apologetically.
Silence
broke between us,but the music which was slow jazz kept us singing in
low tones as Annabel drove to our destination for the evening. My
mind was rushing on pell-mell from one feverish attitude to another
while staring outside the car in motion.
Finally
we arrived , given cordial welcome and felt at home. Inside,
the house smelled smartly varnished,fresh and beautiful. I could
smell the air, and I really loved rock 'n' roll which was playing as
we entered. The inside lighting had a strong effect. The led lights
were coruscating
and glimmering. The atmosphere was warm and festive. There is
a buffet, alcohol and the crowd was dressed to kill. My eyes glossed
over the mass of partygoers standing around.
Annabel
was to assist in welcoming guests,so I wandered lonely as a cloud
finding my way to the balcony to catch some fresh air. When all at
once I saw a crowd of young guys in their late twenties and
early thirties. Some were smoking cigars and others playing Brain
games as Chess and Ludo. I looked again into the group of guys,
scrunched up my nose, and walked away towards the other end of the
balcony which was unoccupied. I enjoyed the beautiful scenery of
sun-setting as I sipped my drink.
It
wasn’t just footsteps behind me–the tang of expensive
cologne,that made me turn around and glanced at the refined stylish
man walking towards me. The world fell away, drained of all
color but him, standing in the sun-setting evening.
“Hi am Glen,would you mind me joining
you for a chat as the sun sets behind us?”He asked with a polished
accent.
“sure”I replied humbly
“Mind having some cigarettes? He
asked husky
“Nope,am not into such,thanks
though.”I said shyly
Smokers are known to be friendly people
world wide as they have the sharing aspect. They are the only group
of people who don’t mind asking for a lighter or a cigarette from a
stranger and conversation follow suit. I don’t entertain smokers
especially desiring them but Glen will be exceptional. He is
ravishing and seemly.
At
first glare,Glen seemed very shy and ambivalent,his physical
appearance was striking .His facial features were smooth, rounded,
and very assuming. He had a dark complexion which suited my kind of
guy. He was a little taller than average .His hair was short dark and
well combed having natural waves. He wore a plain black shirt with
a blue jeans and red snickers. How can I describe the scent of
his skin? He smells something like cinnamon-- dry and sweet. cinnamon
are known to be
aphrodisiac for some women,I am falling for this. The
gods, is it wrong for me to imagine laying my head on his chest and
closing my eyes and breathing in his smell?”Smell is important. It
reminds a person of all the things he's been through; it is a sheath
of memories and security.
Glen thought about the way we could
find an endless well of idle chat for any situation, we talked
politics and its effects to common mwananchi. We immensely debated
the Machiavellian philosophy and its impacts to our political
environment. We discussed man-milieu and how it affects development.
He really captivated me with his intels,travels and the so many books
he has read of which I personally have read too. He was enthralled by
my adventurous life style. We were compatible
intellectually,religiously,socially and economically. We understood
each others jokes. There is nothing like deep breaths after laughing
hard for the right reasons. We were engrossed in our world that we
almost forgot the party.
“You look sassy,”He said to me in a
modulated voice. I liked the way he said the words with confidence
and poised. The few time we were together I realized that he choose
his words with fastidious care. A man loves through his eyes,and a woman
through her ears.
“Me too,”I affirmed tremulously
He made me smile infectiously with his
many description of why he must chase me. Everything Glen said
fascinated me giving my heart exquisite pleasure hence refined. Glen
sense of humor,savored the moment we shared.
After chatting for an hour or so,with
intervals of having drinks and snacks,Glen finally brought up the
residential subject.
“Where do you live and work if you
dont mind?”He asked gravely
“Nairobi of course,born,raised and
might be buried here if I don’t relocated to France ,my dream
country.”I answered boldly.
I starred at him to answer the question
at hand.
“I live and work in Botswana. Have
been working there for four years” He paused,” Do you mind
relocating there. Its a nice place and job hunting isn’t that
involving as here at home. I want to have you near me.”He said
croaky
I looked at him with disbelief. United
by smoke divided by distance.
I was not going to compromise and leave
my comfort zone for a stranger who had enticed me for few hours for a
destination not well known by me and Annabel my best friend. I liked
him and he fitted my kind of guy. The polished accent,tasteful
intel,gorgeous body,stylish dress-code,dark complexion,rich scent
name it all. I lost myself in his world looking at all the qualities
he possessed but deep down I knew this was a dead end. We ladies know
if a relationship will go on or not at the few moments spent
together.
Annabel was happy for me as she saw me
engaging with Glen. She would wink her eyes and smile while offering
us drinks. At times she would murmur at me “Compatible”I just
giggled and awaited for the ride home to give her my reasons as to
why not yet. Cold war
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Hahaa...Don't loose that chance!!...I looked at him with disbelief. United by smoke divided by distance....Annabel...At times she would murmur at me “Compatible”I just giggled and awaited for the ride home to give her my reasons as to why not yet. Cold war...to be continued???????
ReplyDeleteHi Essy,
ReplyDeleteNice story. Just a small advice though; they the adverb is not your friend when you need to make a go at a gripping story. Also, wrap a conversation simply with 'he/she said' - show, don't tell is the rule of the thumb.
Keep at it
A fellow enthusiast
Thanks,Advice well noted.
DeleteNice story line but you overused vocabulary, work on the grammar part also eg. He said croaky, the house smelled smartly vanished, don't meant to be a nit picker, just work on the grammar and this story is amazing, kudos. Nutshell: Simplicity is key.
ReplyDeleteThanks,i take you advice with pleasure.Thanks for taking your time to read
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